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Sâmbouan Darius is on page 20 of 428 of Blood Over Bright Haven
I can go to sleep now because these first pages bored me to death. It's straight up bad writing. From the very first paragraph it's a total mess. The metaphors shift the tone within the sentence ? The author is telling me something she should make me discover by myself via sub-text? The last 2 sentences have nothing to do with the first ones? She's writing the character before the moment of action in the beginning?
Feb 21, 2026 05:46PM Add a comment
Blood Over Bright Haven

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Sâmbouan Darius is 50% done with I Who Have Never Known Men
Very disappointed. It lacks originality in a really bad way. I also find the writing style to have no writing style at all, it feels bland and commercial.
Dec 10, 2025 09:11AM Add a comment
I Who Have Never Known Men

Sâmbouan Darius
Sâmbouan Darius is on page 50 of 173 of I Who Have Never Known Men
Very disappointed. It lacks originality in a really bad way. I also find the writing style to have no writing style at all, it feels bland and commercial.
Dec 10, 2025 09:09AM Add a comment
I Who Have Never Known Men

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Sâmbouan Darius is finished with Heaven
This book really brings me to tears from time to time.
Nov 20, 2025 04:28PM Add a comment
Heaven

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