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SOBBING

TRAGEDY

-i think i’ve hit past the point of classical fantasy exposition confusion and into the meat and grind (it wasnt so bad with this one tho)
-the one thing of “that must be what stroud is doing” couldve been omitted, like yea we gathered

okkkkkkk (the violence is slightly reminiscent of blood over bright haven maybe?)

i wish every page of this book would paper cut me so i would start to slowly bleed to death and i wouldnt have to read another poorly written cringe story about incest

chap 4

at first: good start but like sure
now? yea i see it. the vision? seen