Erin > Recent Status Updates

Ok the editing is horrendous. Whoever the author uses needs to be fired. I totally understand a once in so often grammatical error but this book… it’s like every other page there’s an error that makes that sentence unreadable. Also… it really grinds my gears that she uses the same “probably in jail” line for both her father and Nikas mom. Storyline is great but I’m struggling to not DNF honestly

Noooooooot loving the whole flash back to when she was 10 to the smut with the same guy thing. Feeling pretty icky from that. I’m already too committed to DNF but damn did I almost turn this off so damn quick.

Very efficient world building so far. First 20ish pages had me worried but it’s quick to catch on.

Loving that I red F&F in between the last book and this. Obsessed. Absolutely cannot put this down

When I say that I’m DEVOURING this book I mean it. I started hoping to be half done by the premiere tomorrow and I’m currently 3/4. I’ll easily finish this today. This story is my favorite love story of all.

Ok. I’m all for lots of smut. It’s how I prefer a book. But this one is dragging. It’s lost most of the plot to their constant fucking. This book could easily been half the length. I’m too committed ti DNF but if I knew one chapter would contain the same sex scene 3 times I wouldn’t have even started. Give it some pazazz and maybe it would be ok. It’s all just the same scene repeated though