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its good, i wish it wasn’t so flip floppy - most chapters are from belly’s pov, some are jeremiah’s but it tells you when it’s jeremiah’s pov - but, for belly’s u have to kinda use context clues to figure out if its the present or past and it flips back and forth between the two a lot.

check out page 304-305 lol.. repeated paragraph!!! very poor editing when u get close to the end of the book. :( disappointed

its a really great book! on the very last part of 299 to the beginning of 300, its like part of the book was forgotten, as on page 300 part of the quote on the very first line is missing and had nothing to do with what was happening on 299. and, on page 303-304, i was confused with the conversation happening betweek lillia and kat, as it seemed like kat’s dialogue on 304 shouldve been lillia talking. idk, lol.