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Fairly bored of the plot, but interested in seeing what happens regardless. Taking me longer to read because of this.

I'm not incredibly interested in the overall concept of this one so far. I'm also kind of displeased with how little Deanna is being used in the story. She's described as being around, or with the away team, but she barely has any interactions, dialogue, or involvement in the plot at all so far. Hopefully that changes.

The dynamic between the two different species is interesting though dramatic. The characters are a bit over stereotyped.

The humor is a little heavy handed and the depictions of the characters and their quirks are really on the nose.

Enjoying the energetic feel from the jump of this one, also glad that it doesn't immediately start out chapter one in someone else's POV that isn't on the Enterprise. Chapter two does though.

I'm loving that it mostly follows Data and Geordi.