so far it’s okay. i will say that the excessive amount of internal dialogue kind of irks me lmao. like… 5 pages of her walking down a sidewalk and looking at house decorations. not everything the characters do need exact detail, and not every action needs an internal dialogue. BUT!!! i am gonna continue to read it bc the MMCS are intriguing asf.
— Nov 07, 2023 09:35PM
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