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Writing is sort of repetitive we get it he’s powerful it doesn’t need to be said every paragraph

The writing style feels weird. The way people talk to each other also feels weird. However, I’m still very interested in what is happening

Pretty intriguing so far! It’s definitely keeping me hooked!

Really really enjoying this. It’s hard to put down!

2 Chapter still going very strong

Still going very strong and intriguing

Chapter one starts out very strong and captures attention immediately.

The writing feels awkward.

I KNEW DAXEN WASNT TO BE TRUSTED.

I’m pretty sure the author just gave away who Neon chooses in her love square 🤣

It’s a fun mix of sci-fi/fantasy. Kind of like steampunk. It reminds me of like, howls moving castle, Horizon Zero Dawn and Star Wars.

Oh this book is GOOD

I LOVE how descriptive this author is

This book is GRIPPING

There’s so much juicy tension and build up between Feras and Clara that the moment when they finally come together feels a little underwhelming. Like it could’ve stood to be a tiny bit spicier.

I wish the trials had more details and went on a smidge longer, they were so interesting.

“I want to offer you a challenge” this is scene is making my heart race

Pg 24 “torture” should be “tortured”

Pg 22 misspell “trobbed” should be “throbbed”

Now that the first chapter has started it’s a bit easier to read. Like it’s been translated better. And it is very intriguing!

It is reading sort of.. awkwardly. But I believe that is because of it being translated from Italian to English. It could be wise for the author to invest in having someone fluent in both Italian and English to translate it before its release.