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The twists (plural!!) are so conflicting yet satisfying I'm suprised Shen stuck the landing. How is this a debut book. I mean wow!! I will be following with great interest!

Idk...maybe...idk

This was the worst of Riyria Chronicles. 2 fake out deaths, expo dumps, nonstop references. I agree with the opinion Gwen was dead weight never bring her along. She kills the synergy of the duo with her prophecy bull$***. Enough with the prophecies! That's what made Legends bad

It's starting to breakdown. Why are you info-dumping so far into the book still! I'm starting to see the cracks. Also how does inverting Earth's racial hierarchy explore new concepts without it coming off as being subversive for the sake of subversion

Super ultra mega holsum! Promises made promises kept

Oh, ok there it is

WANG!! There better be a pay for Chekov's glass sword 🗡️

Werid sexual metaphor from MC???

He mentally ejaculated. Haha 'i can't...I can't man lol

Chapter 89 is absolute cinema! Dumas was cooking with this one

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Haidee- *visibly crying & shaking* "That's how l lost my dad."

Albert- "I am delighted and intrigued, please tell me more."

Haidee- *cries & moans* "Okay..."

Lol wtf Albert read the room buddy

Albert is so done with people talking about the count. He is so sassy lol, I love it!

Oh snap! Edmond's escape was going so well

Oh yeah, that's it! I'm done with this series. I need a break...and some aspirin...

You're upset about people renting out a plantation house. Are you serious? Am I crazy? Has this book broken my brain?

Yes! Get her a$$ Selwyn! Dunking on dumb decisions made by the MC id my bread and butter

Huh...Literal sexual healing...that's a first. Wow

For a guy who dunks on honor Falcio sure does adhere to strain of it.

Secret daughter drama is the the best! Tynisa glaring at Sten the whole night was hilarious!

Alright, Tynisa well done

Wow Kara is on some gangster stuff.

"Your anecdotes are insipid and your prose is trash" Damn girl, someone get the medial alchemist, we got one in critical condition.

Holy Toledo! The spells are made of people WTF!!

Sciona laughing like a crazy person is peak!

A lot of exposition but the dialogue keeps it from becoming dry.

This author knows how to right a FMC well. She's not a Mary Sue but also isn't a victim of the "not like other girls"isms that plague fantasy. Not much on the MMC yet. The opening was powerful though but that might be me relating to having an older sister growing up.

Araha is so boring. I was awaiting for Ged to show up to bring some life into it.

Nevermind... fake-out death

HAHA, I guess kin-slaying runs in the family! lol