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It’s very thought provoking and it’s made me rather emotional, I’ve teared up twice in just reading the introduction and first chapter!

Getting super good, close to the end but I don’t want it to end!

Getting really good, Ian expressed his crush to Wanda and kissed her but Wanda’s confused because of Melanie, I wish she could figure out HER feelings apart from Melanie

It’s starting to get really good, Jared left then Wanderer now Wanda lol eventually immersed herself into their society but now Jared is back and murderous but Jamie is keeping everyone at bay, I think Ian and Wanda are starting to catch feelings but it’ll really get started soon I’d bet

Now it’s getting good, she made it to Uncle Jeb’s and the community, found Jared and Jamie! Everyone’s mad and don’t know Melanie is still in there, few assassination attempts but things are moving. Ian tried to strangle her and I think he’s the one Wanderer falls in love with but I can’t quite remember from the movie

Yucky Melanie is 17 and Jared is 26? They’ve known each other for a month and already talking about possibly sleeping together??? That’s so Twilight coded lol and gross

So far it’s really interesting, I love that it talks about biology and science I wasn’t expecting that.

Well it’s starting to catch more of my attention but there’s SO much telling and now nearly enough showing. One sentence in the middle of a scene tells me it’s been months up to a YEAR since a previous part, I’m getting dropped with little BIG pieces of info and I’m not getting the full view of the story. It’s like it’s skipping over everything not involving romantic drama.

It has a lot of potential, the plot is good so far and the relationships make sense for the most part. I do feel like Ron and Davina’s are way to advanced for where they are right now. It’s clear that it needs more editing, the writing is telling us everything rather than showing. I also think this book would be better in first person rather than third.