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I’ve just started this book and tell me why there has already been 4 different scenes where the author repeated herself? And why is it kind of too descriptive on things that clearly have nothing to do with the plot? I just read an entire page on the decor of the bar and I’m bored as fuck for the first time.

8% in and the FMC’s father who was feared by all his enemies and was a strong pillar (or something like that) has been repeated 3 times already! The plot is intriguing but the writing needs to be worked on because if I see it repeated one more time I’m going to dnf.

Gareth is literally Landon and killian but in another font. He’s like the version that hides his sadistic psychopath intentions and I’m not sure I like it because this isn’t the Gareth I read about in the other books.

I’ve cried a river already! This is so fucking good and heartbreaking!