Michelle Lim > Recent Status Updates

Sometimes I think the book title has the ability of misconceiving the story lines, am I starting to doubt something here while still in the early stage of the story? Yes, yes I am.

I'm just saying, maybe it shouldn't be called what it is..

I swear, the truth behind Lucy's illness should have come cleaned already at this point, because honestly, it's dragging too long for a short standalone.

Well, that was an interesting turned of event, at page 106 I was thrown back to the present situation in the book, a continuation from page 1 to page 4. Meaning this book is written with a representation of going back and forth from past events and present events.

Somehow the writing does not seem to help guide the reader when is the start for both past and present, that's where the confusion is.

At this point of the story, it just feels like the Extremely Upper Management are personally attacking the orphanage, or rather attacking the master of the orphanage, instead of focusing on the main subject in investigating the well-being of the children.

it's been very slow.. not sure how I feel about it, YET. Truthfully, I feel like at page 200 the story and adventure just started and I'm starting to think that this is somewhat a cozy read instead of an adventurous fantasy.