I’m gonna nitpick—21% in, two things I’ve noted:
1. The drive from Beloit, WI to Gatlinburg, TN is described as being 7 hours. Immediately I know it isn’t, because Ohio isn’t even 6 hours away. It should’ve been like 10 hours
2. The phrase “birds beeped and chattered”. Technically yes I know what you mean, but beeped isn’t exactly the word I would have paired with chattered
— Feb 08, 2026 10:53AM
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