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Dont let the cover fool you. I am currently being emotionally eviscerated and have been crying for the last 50 pages at least.

Aidens mum is an asshole. I feel like the author is trying to make Aiden seem selfish here but its not working

This guy just got described as 'lean' and 'muscle-knotted' in the same damn sentence

The book keeps flipping back and forth on Nox’s views and personality

DNF at 15%. I doubt i'm going to go back to this. It was awkward and I didn't like any of the characters.

I'm finding it hard to believe this kid is horrified about seeing his dad punch someone but hasn't commented at all on the fact he just witnessed a ritualistic sacrifice and heard people talking about a god?

"I had a pair of dark jeans.... paired with a black button up which I wore untucked and unbuttoned just a little at the top so the silver pendant I always wore tired around my neck with a thin black cord would show."

Hi my name is Ebony Dark'ness Dementia Raven Way and I have long ebony black hair (that's how I got my name) with purple streaks and red-

(first Ive heard about the pendant too)

I have realised in the 2 pages since I updated that its so hard to write a book where you know the main character is already in love with the love interest. You need to give me time to even get to like him you know. I dont want to be told hes hansome and sweet, I want to SEE it.

What kind of teenager says 'effing' in their own head. Pretty sure its perfectly safe to swear whilst thinkin, kid

im so frustrated with these character rn.

Half way through and I feel like the story is just getting started now.