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L is 58% done with A Death in Door County (Monster Hunter, #1)
Issues with showing not telling.
— Sep 09, 2026 09:23AM Add a comment
A Death in Door County (Monster Hunter, #1)

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L is 84% done with The Prison Healer (The Prison Healer, #1)
Lynette Noni’s writing is technically correct but lacks any personality whatsoever. There’s no unique voice and no vision. Every character except for Naari is bland and the story is just pieces of YA tropes cobbled together. I could go on and on about the mistakes made here but unlike Noni, I will not waste your time with long boring explanations.
— Aug 18, 2026 10:20AM Add a comment
The Prison Healer (The Prison Healer, #1)

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