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Lots of jumping around with time and dates.

Soooooooo much detail it becomes dry, trying to get through it for the action

I won’t finish this

I won’t finish this

I won’t finish this

I won’t go back to this

I’m in it enough to see how things progress. What makes her writing so good in this case also adds to tediousness. And how much more awful could the backstory get. Every chapter was worse than the previous. Finally getting into the heart of the matter at p.135

It’s accidentally large print.

So far. About people I don’t know and don’t care alll that much wabout.