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I feel like the more I read it the harder it gets to keep reading. I don’t like the switching point of views. Serefin’s POV is so slow and Nadya’s is a bit better but getting pretty repetitive.

Still really have no idea what’s going on. The pacing is weird. Weeks are going by but other than the character literally saying it I wouldn’t have known.

It’s hard to understand so far and it feels almost too fast paced.

Good so far!