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Look, I have some asocial tendencies of my own, and totally understand how draining conversations can be but Jesus Christ, Kiela, you don’t have to be an absolute asshat to everyone, especially people just trying to help you. 🙄

Here we go…19 pages in and I’m already annoyed by some inaccuracies. The naming of her invented places doesn’t match the general naming conventions of actual places in Scotland. Greerloch, for example, should probably be Lochgreer and Skallangal seems to be Norse, those place names are more common in the Isles than the Highlands. Also the right to roam seems to be unknown to the author. No trespassing laws

I'm not digging Lailoken's POV, tbh. The casually misogynistic way he talks about women, like they just exist to warm his bed and how he doesn't want to "tether" himself to one woman so he can keep sleeping around, kinda gives me the ick...