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this rlly is the most infuriating and poorly fleshed out world building i have ever read. the way aspects of the lore are revealed is so shoddy and amateurish i have secondhand embarrassment. let’s invent new places and all knowing creatures and power sources that no one understands, plus introduce random rules that lend themself so conveniently to the storyline they are actually more confusing. i’m in PAIN.

we’re 90 pages in and three mouths have been described as sensuous. anyway.

make it stop

this shit is BANANAS

Heathcliff is a toxica!!! i am SAT

this book is TEA

so far this lacks the emotional depth i’ve really appreciated in the other memoirs i’ve read recently, even those that aren’t perfectly written. it’s like, weirdly logistics heavy? and maybe it’s supposed to be about the logistics of coming back from something like this? but i thought and hoped it would be more emotionally immersive.

finally something i actually like!! we were on the struggle bus for a second there!!

i know i am sooo late to the party but she’s cute !

few things anger me more than lazy fantasy writing where the magic has arbitrary rules and the stakes aren’t clear. you can imagine i am not having a great time.

so i can’t stand this girl. she has no consistency. she cannot comprehend simple truths and perseverates on the same three things for 200 pages (mainly her fucking awful family) when we have Resolved these issues. her inner monologue is moronic and repetitive but then her dialogue is surprisingly clear and she’s a competent stone cold killer? I’m strugglingggg

yallllll i am underwhelmed. but i HEAR YOU when you say it gets better. it really needs to tho eeee