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Im really not sure the author thought about the implications of the MC getting her revenge on the man that tortured her but her lover is basically not punished for the thousands of lives he sold...

Like I get they have to get together but like girl... he was in the skin trade. For decades. And only decided NOW that he has morals?????

... they had a one night stand and this man is not only still pining four years later but will basically move heaven and earth (except stop human trafficking I guess) for her?????????

... youre just gonna leave your daughter with your brother who almost died of an overdose the night before???????

Oh the MC is not just Advanced Stupid. This woman is Superior Stupid. Jesus Christ.

... yeah sure let's end this run with the human trafficker. I'm sure I won't end up mad as hell.

You're telling me this man survived an explosion and wakes up ready to fuck MULTIPLE TIMES???????

On the one hand, wtf.

On the other hand, this is the unhinged bullshit I was waiting for with these books.

I'm rooting for the yuri outcome at this point.

*points at Marco* you want me to root for this pathetic sack?

The MC is not just stupid. She is advanced stupid.

The man was shot and we're having desk sex???????

You know when you look at a situation and go "yeah, might as well"? This is me with these books.

Ivan: little spy
Adriano: what did he mean by that?
Me: sir you cannot be this dense
Eva: ...
Adriano: is he targeting you because I'm Mirabella's father?
Me: SIR YOU CANNOT BE THIS DENSE
Two brain cells fighting for third place, my dude.

It took til like the 70% mark for stuff to actually happen.

Also they're firing her when they literally FORCED her into the situation that led her to be claimed? Why did coach get his own room? Yall knowingly put a volatile Alpha in the room with an Omega.

Why are we now bringing up random trauma that was not foreshadowed and also trying to convince me hes not a bad guy?

Was this proofread?

This is beyond stupid. Y'all can obviously tell she's in heat or at least a solo Omega and COACH gets his own room???? At the very least let her room with one of the Betas????? No, we have her room with the most volatile Alpha on the team that is known to be unstable around her.

I demand my smut be less contrived! She was alone with him for their therapy sessions and her heat suppressants were failing then!

Its kinda banal that a genre that was started with queer people can be made this aggressively heteronormative.

GIRL YOU CANT PUT PUDDING THERE. THE YEAST

This shit has gone off the rails in the past ten minutes.

A woman allowed to have stretch marks???? Be still my beating heart.

You really want me to believe a man that was shot like a week ago and dying of infection a few days ago has the energy to sustain fucking?????

I probably seem unhinged at work but the entire confrontation with Emma's father is forcing me to hold back my laughter