I'm trying so hard to finish this bc it really is excellent in so many ways but oh my god the editor was slacking pleaseeeeee can you just trust the reader a little bit here.. you don't have to spell out every single characters motivations and history and opinions on their destiny every single time they do so much as take a shit WE GET IT BC YOU SAID IT 500 TIMES ALREADY AND I REMEMBER
— Jun 09, 2026 01:26PM
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