The writing in this is really not great ... almost 50% of the way through the book and there has yet to be a clear physical description of either main character beyond their eye colors and the color of the FMC's hair (which wasn't provided until 50 pages in). In one chapter, it's apparently a beautiful summer day and then, in the next (which is supposedly the next day), it's the middle of winter....
— Apr 16, 2026 10:29AM
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