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Boring. A lot happens but none of it is interesting

Zelu's family is so toxic. I really just want to read the Rusted Robots parts.

Too many stupid typos. Beckon call instead of beck and call, y instead of by, accept instead of except. I think this would've been a better audiobook. The story is entertaining but the glaring errors just take me right out of the story.

Tedious

So far it's a good story, well explained magic rules, excellent pacing: longer chapters to advance the story, shorter chapters for action sequences. I'd love to see this adapted as a movie or miniseries

I'm in real danger of a DNF. I found the "romance" creepy especially as Alina is clearly very immature and the Darkling (ffs, does he not have a name?) is a hundred years older. She's basically a child being preyed upon by a man old enough to be her great great great grandfather.