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Please dont let this child disappear while sitting unaccompanied in this mans tent.
Please.

This is good stuff.

Please dont let this child disappear under this man's care.
Please.

"My sex"

Can you maybe NOT say that?
Jesus.

Carrion Swift is the lovable, comedic, palate-cleanser fuckboy that this books needs.
Never change.

I fucking love whatever is wrong with Liv Zander.

HOOK IT TO MY VEINS, FUCK.

This is the good shit right here. Goddamn.

Either the writing has gotten marginally better, or ive gotten dumber cos I'm, dare I say, liking this book now?
Its kinda funny at times.
I fuck with that.

I'm struggling bad with the writing in this. There are so many pointless, superfluous sentences and breaks to tell me the "history" of Yvelia and I'm finding it so tough to connect with this book.

Like dont tell me, fucking SHOW me. I'm not an idiot, I'll figure it out.

Don't get me started on the dialogue. Fucking hell.

Did I mention I drive a Mustang?

This book is tearing my soul apart.
I can't wait to read it again.