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I like how every time Eezy says a bible verse, the part of the bible it comes from is in asterisks at the bottom of the page.

Nancy and Junie find the shepherd, Eezy, unconscious.

We are off to a hot start! First few pages and already there is a theft! This one started much faster than "The Sky Phantom"

Nancy finds oil in a nearby cave.

This mystery is all over the place, but it seems to be focused on real life events that happen while the mystery is going on, rather than full on dedication to solving it. Some parts seem a bit rushed as a result. I think i have an idea of what I will rate this.

Tense moment where Nancy and Bruce get stuck in a cloud. Luckily, they get out!

A very sad scene where the antagonist (we believe) shoots a pony in the leg, and they have to put it down. However, it's written a bit rushed. In fact, the whole book seems to be a bit rushed. More updates later, but it's decent so far.

A possible suspect has been introduced.