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I'm kinda confused on what's going on but it's enjoyable.
Cringe at times.

mid

Yeah, not for me.
I was honestly excited to read a comedy, but this is just depressing. Am i meant to laugh at the sick old man who is being abused and manipulated? or that the woman that's using him has big tits? because it's the only way she is described. There's no humour in this. It's just sad and infuriating.

Well it's not a comedy and quite frankly very depressing.
All the characters are dislikable and annoying, and the points they make are much thoughtless.
The writing is such a drag. There was a page that just listed every single thing that the character's mother grew in her garden. I don't need that information, it's not something that gets mentioned often enough.

YOOOOOOOOOOOOO
THIS SHIT GOES HARD

The only part of the book mentioned in the blurb was like 10 pages long, and it was soo fucking bad.This guy is actually a dumbass I swear to god. I could write a better book than this and I got a fucking 4 in english! This guy went to uni!
What the fuck!? The only thing he would beat me in is making references to obscure writers or media. The guy fucking lists them off. Shame he doesnt have any of his own ideas tho

Ok this bit was actually good but it literally has nothing to do with everything else in yhe book, and im pretty sure he just copied it from some german records that he mentions in the acknowledgements.

meh

What kind of guy has to be so far up his own ass to reference some obscure piece of literature - each in a different language - every 3 pages and use the words "litters of suburban middle-class piglets importunately nuzzling oligarchic sows" to describe people living in apartment blocks. You've achieved nothing, I dont think you're smart I think you'd be annoying to be around. But hey, im only 30 pages in. Save this.