Chapter one: I like the factions and that they have their own unique blessings(I think). The different biology depending on factions is cool. The world building and lore is great so far. There are some cringe things in the way it's written like when the instruments were described as "mating" and the sometimes excessiveness of swearwords but I like it alot so far.
— Oct 02, 2024 10:03PM
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