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“That I’m still desperately, masochistically in love with you?”

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“It can hurt like hell,” I said. “But somebody else being disappointed in who you are doesn’t make who you are disappointing. It makes them unable to see that you shine brighter than they are able to handle.”

PREACH IT ALVIN ✨️✨️✨️✨️

"Alvin wasn’t just here to supervise. He was here to test me. To tempt me. And if I couldn’t survive that… If I couldn’t survive the temptation, then all the effort I put in over the years would turn into something more dangerous than fear. It would turn into proof that I never really believed I deserved love without conditions attached to it."

kill me now 😭😭

Ohhhhh the angst is angst-ing here!

jesus christ how many times are we repeating the same thing?

Ohhhh I hate Bane & Zero....there better be some decent grovelling in this book!

Tex comparing himself to a sectional sofa is killing me 😂

"I would've waited forever for you" KILL ME NOW 😭🖤 Tex you loving bastard, you're breaking me

I am struggling with Franklin so bad....I hate him! please tell me he goes away and leaves Tate & Lee in peace

My heart is breaking for Cade 😭

Harley eating the monopoly iron has finished me off! 😂😂😂😂

he calls him princess.....I have no notes 🖤

Eloise seems like an absolute twat.

WHAT IN THE SWEET BABY JESUS IS THIS WRITING STYLE?! Stop describing everything like a whimsical fairy.....they're hockey players in their 20's, they are not whimsical!

STOP USING THE WORD LAVE FFS

I really, really don't like Jayk at the moment....I really hope he changes pretty sharpish because he's pissing me right off

why do the FMCs never condition their hair?!?!?! must be so knotty!

words that shouldn't be uttered 'flooding my womb with his cum' 🤢

if I read the phrase 'earth and air, brown and blue' one more time I'm going to scream

this is such a horrendously rushed ending!

are they ever gonna do anything except fuck? like come on!

Sorry but Skylar is the most pig headed, ignorant FMC ever. Stop being a twat about Ronan, it's not his fault. eurgh I'm finishing this out of sheet willpower

that car scene was not possible.

for God sake woman stop being such a stuck up twat and fuck him already!

I'm sorry, if a billionaire told me to get on a private jet and have all new clothes....I'm not saying no. Why is Margo being so whiny?! shut up and say thank you!

Ava is already super irritating and whiny. She's not a vibe.

So hold on a second Wolfe wouldn't even hold her hand 10 pages ago and now he's boning her and being part of an orgy with her.....make it make sense.

If someone asks "do you feel it too?" one more time I'm going to explode.....does this author actually understand pacing/setting the scene etc?!

aaaaaand now we've changed names......😩😒