Thoughts so far-
God this is badly written.
The author is so desperate for you to know that the MC is 'special'. You couldn't get more not-like-other-girls if you tried. Constantly talking about her wearing converse and band shirts and being edgy. We get it.
The dialogue is so unrealistic I want to scream. The brother says her nickname every sentence for the 1st 10 chapters. Ridiculous.
— Jan 16, 2024 07:59AM
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