Good. Great world building which is a little slow for me right now. And a lot of repetitive writing style- “I went this way, and then found they weren’t here so I had to go back another way.” “That IS the question, but first we need to answer this!” “I was content, and yet, there was sorrow.” This and that, this yet that, this then that. It’s distracting.
— Nov 29, 2025 03:11PM
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