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yeah no i already guessed there would be some dramatic ass reveal that arch was actually a really bad guy and deserved to die so that his death for being around adeline was justified. and i was right. yes i 100% believe abusers get what they deserve, but for the book to use DV as this like scape goat to justify z killing arch when it was simply bc he’s a fucking weird who laid claim to this complete stranger. what.

“he develops a vagina” as a way to show gal/strength, calling God a woman and her…. like lmao okay you can’t try to pose as this feminist pro women book when the mmc is a literal rapist abuser that tortures the fmc and then the narrative has them get together. YEAH OKAY real fucking feminist

skinny jeans in the club is the worst thing to happen in this entire book

why does z talk like a middle schooler who has learned about curse words for the first time

daya is not a good friend and just as dumb as adeline is. what “good friend” is gonna let their friend stay in a house that’s been broken into twice without either offering for them to stay with you, calling the police, or INSTALLING FUCKING SECURITY CAMERAS???? why is adeline so chill about an intruder literally entering and leaving her home at the wazoo???? bitch they live in seattle where tf is the police at

the only upside of this book is that it’s so easy to read. that isn’t a compilment, it’s just that this book is incredibly juvenile and fanfiction-esque (which is offensive to fanfiction because i’ve read ff better written than a lot of published books)

i’m like 95% this author either wrote fanfiction before or this is a fanfiction/wattpad story revamped bc wow this has the exact cadence and writing style of 2017 wattpad books

hate reading this book because that’s the level of boredom i’ve reached this summer