• Rather flat/lacking authenticity. It feels weird that religion and the military/gov't are written like that.
• It reminds me a lot of the sort of thing you'd find on wattpad, or rwby.
• I think instalove is fine if the characters are infatuated, and then find reasons to love each other, but I don't think that's what's happening here.
• Jude definitely has one of those male living spaces you find on reddit.
— Aug 06, 2024 09:47PM
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