A bit wordy but captivating. I’m intrigued by why Jack matters enough to get his own chapter titles. Having the killers POV is interesting and I hope to read more in it. The fact that he’s the 1st person pov and not Toni is a twist I wasn’t expecting. The hard break is odd to add and I think maybe a bit unnecessary other than introducing Suzanne. Seems quick tho. Killer might protect toni from other killer.
— Sep 22, 2025 08:41PM
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