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Last 200 pages have been AMAZING, maybe in coming around on this one after all

It’s getting better, think I need to overlook a lot, but it feels straightforward at this point, maybe I’m just feeling guilty

Massive bursts of energy and plot development followed by 50-60 pages of slow, plodding, nothing. I cant imagine this will get better. Characters are one dimensional to a fault, and make such frustrating decisions it makes your eyes bleed. The random jokes and dozens of pages of character development is wholly unneeded and I cant understand its stellar reviews so far

I don’t know, the reviews for this boon are so good but the characters are so loose and one dimensional, not to mention how strangely horny it’s been, horror aspects are really solid but I haven’t had a session where I didn’t roll my eyes, 200 pages done quick though, so I’m compelled to read it(?)

I mean it’s not BAD, but it might also have the least compelling villain and inciting incident I’ve read

We are teetering on DNF already

Just cried so hard I couldn’t even finish the chapter

God DAMN

Chapter 70/109
It’s just great, amazing work and great characters, I’m so surprised how comedic it stays while pushing its serious nature, so much political relevancy and emotional depth,
WOMEN AUTHORS ARE GOATED AT REALISTIC CHARACTERS NOBODY CAN CHANGE MY MIND

Why do I keep crying at pictures

Chapter 40 of 109
So elite

There are definitely 789 pages in this book, count is wayyyy off?

Incredible

“But us…that which is thin to us is thick to others. Dull to us, resplendent to fools. I envy the blind. To accept mystery. To witness a corpse and think Valhalla instead of maggots”

I can’t imagine this series getting better and then it does and I can’t stop thinking about it all day and I’ll be back from work at 5pm to read more

100 page battle of Mercury is actually peak