The narrative style feels amateur. I know it's supposed to read like a diary but it's so awkward reading - "I'm telling this story cuz it's necessary background information for the next one that I'm gonna tell you..." It's sooo cornyyy, and it keeps happeninggg. And she always writes "It's been so long... I don't remember quite accurately, but this is what I think happened..." This better have a good explanation.
— Dec 30, 2025 04:42PM
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