I was sooo excited to read this BUT…. Chapter 14 and the one thing that drives me crazy about the book is the long chapters describing a simple moment. Ex: “I went to a bakery, I waited at the corner, I looked around, I grabbed a white bag, the bag had my sandwich, I walked outside and sat down, I ate my sandwich…”
I’ve skipped a bunch of long meaningless paragraphs, I truly hope it gets better 🙄
— Jun 12, 2024 11:25AM
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