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Unedited "first draft" set up. It feels like this wasn't given a "3rd draft" re-write to establish the beginning and relationship better but I DO like it so far. This type of narrative isn't my cup of tea but it's still good writing so far. Just a bit jumping the gun, but really good so far.

❤️☕🧵

I can already tell I'm gunna like this book. It's a very down to earth style of writing and I like the dialogue 📚

Wtf r u talking about? Felix isn't doing the dumping, YOU ARE!!🤦 Wat is ur damage girl? It's so annoying that I'm skimming over the "blah blah" of descriptions. Im tired. And I've committed too much to DNF this.

"Oh noooo. I don't know what adults drifting apart is and self internalizing a LOT of emotional baggage because even when it's not about me, I'm gunna make this about our relationship....which isn't really broken (YET) and it's all in my head."

Snore

156 pages and all I know about the main girl is that she hates her parents, carries a torch for her bff, owns a flower shop that is her life, and LOVES that Felix's eyes are brown with a speck of hazel. Absolutely nothing of substance with the FMC. Oh man this book isn't good

"I blamed on what happened on my emotional state. Grief stricken (pseudo mom death) and I was just dumped."
Girlie, where?? You barely thought about being dumped and grief was NOT on ur mind🤣🤣🤣

This girl has a low key having a panic attack because her friend is late to an appointment.... I cannot imagine having so little going on in my life that I'd have a panic attack over this.

19 pages...it took me 19 pages for the ick to take me in this book. This book is appalling to read😵😩 DNF or maybe DO NOT WASTE MY TIME.

Starts off very Grey's Anatomy.
... who's 3 year old is going around saying "darling honey!" And "honey dears!"
...wat?

Catherine crapping Monica.... wasn't she ur best friend, girl? I mean, she totally tried to steal Peter away and all but let's not pretend YOUR any better. Girlfriend, you are a mess for Peter and can't see the forest for the 🌲. Im 75% thro this book and I DON'T know why this guy has FOUR girls tramping themselves after him.

I'm still convinced it's Peter, but man is Catherine delusional....and set up as the perfect fall guy. I don't believe Peter just HAPPENED into her at all. The other two ladies were called there. She's the only one who "happened to be in the area" .... she's a social media party planner. I'm sure it wasn't THAT difficult to line the dates of the party up with Catherine's visit.

Imma just say it. I think it's Peter. The more they try to convince me it's NOT him, the more I believe it is. The guy had literally x5 the reasons to want her dead. He is filthy rich and in no way a good guy or mature.

Its been a tad slow here. But it's finally picking up. Catherine, you are such a mess girl. The vision of Maya in my head is NOT the Maya on the page and I don't care 🤣

Girl, those 3 therapists and a retreat was for THIS guy? He is a human turd you want to 🍆🤣🤣 he is so whiney and "boohoo me" guy.

Had to re-read some of these pages because I completed my first 100 pages of writing for my book!!✨🥇🎉

Didn't feel like reading much today. But damn, did home girl just hear about a death and only reaction after reapplying her makeup?? 🤣🤣🤣

Interesting way of writing but I don't hate it so far. 🤞

Not much time to read today. I'm feeling the feels but I hate how much this book gave me grievance after grievance only to uno reverse me

This is a strange book to say the least

I like the story itself ....but I honestly can't ignore how much Gideon seemed to have the hots for "an undone TINY girl."....I don't like how often we r reminded that Rune is small (like a child.) and How often he likes to see her "a complete mess." I'll be having a video about this.🫪🤷

....I have some thoughts about how overly similar this plot is starting to be. But with extra characters. But at least main leads are talking

I LOVE the characterization in this book. The relationships not just between the main and side characters but also the background characters really makes me smile. Finally an author that doesn't forget that everyone has an opinion about everyone else 🙌

I don't LOVE how a FEMALE character is suggesting the ML check "between her legs" for witch scars after ML saw the FMC naked on the beach, when there's no proof she is the Moth as far as they're concerned. Kinda icky.