I’m enjoying this story, but I do find the magic system and the world building surrounding the magic system itself and its origin a little confusing. I personally think this could have been explained a bit better with less use of the purple prose. Having this book written in plainer English with its complex magic system would made it less taxing and more enjoyable for the reader to comprehend I think.
— Apr 12, 2026 02:43PM
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