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So far, it’s a touch slow. Writing is a little basic and not very colorful. I’m noticing I’m having to fill in the gaps and when I’m seeing the scenes in my mind I’m having to doll it up because there is a lack of flowery language and not very many details. Still a decent read and I’m hoping it goes somewhere soon.

It was at first slow. It began clunky, not a smooth read in my opinion in the first 30 pages, but!! It changed and I suppose he found his stride within the story. It’s getting juicy.