Idk about the pacing. The writing is like a culmination of bullet points "and then he," over and over (I don't mean this literally btw) everything feels so abrupt? The characters introduced have zero presence and I don't feel connected to Ronny or even a little bit intrigued by Ben. I will continue though this might change it's still pretty early
— Apr 29, 2026 05:32PM
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