This is so poorly written that it’s genuinely upsetting me. So far this book feels unedited—the sentences lack linguistic flow, they feel choppy. The descriptive language is severely lacking, I am simply being told of these feelings of dread, I am in no way experiencing them. I may be nitpicking but there is also a ludicrous abundance of ill-used parenthesis.
— May 02, 2025 12:18PM
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