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Amazing so far. I had a hard time starting the first few pates though that can easily be seen as a personal issue. I am obsessed with the poetic prose of this author, the way she describes longing and lust is incredibly visceral. This may land very high on my favourite book list.

This is so poorly written that it’s genuinely upsetting me. So far this book feels unedited—the sentences lack linguistic flow, they feel choppy. The descriptive language is severely lacking, I am simply being told of these feelings of dread, I am in no way experiencing them. I may be nitpicking but there is also a ludicrous abundance of ill-used parenthesis.

it’s okay. i’m not really captured by it yet to be honest