Darrow (MC) is a typical teenage angsty prodigy that will change the world… err whatever. The writing is practically staccato. Short, cheesy one liners that are meant to give the reader an insight into Darrow’s mind, but all it makes me feel is that Darrow is an unlikable pretentious…. His thoughts could be expanded on to really fill out his expressions, but you don’t get that.
— Jul 29, 2026 03:12PM
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