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This would do better if it didn't repeat the plot...

Knew that thing was bad news...don't really like the ending here, everything is moving too fast, too much tell, not enough show.

Seriously, where was this plot earlier!?! This is far more interesting.

Where was this plot 150 pages ago? This is where we should have been, away from whatever that other nonsense was.

I just feel like this arc is so...child's play compared to the scale and stakes the series is trying to set up for. This has just been too unfocused.

A little fast, no? Probably could have milked that much longer...

Oh right, the bounty...thanks for the reminder...I guess.

Yep, was right. That scene could have been done soooo much better or just skipped entirely. There was a myriad of ways to indicate that two of them were conspiring against the immortals without any of the rest of that that seemed way out of place for the Wraith.

It's too bad I didn't read page 200 before the previous update. This should be a study session, she is behind and she's doing drinking games? This is supposed to be a bit more of a calculated character and she's not showing that at all here. This scene is going to be atrocious without me even finishing it.

This reads very YA, which is an issue. I wish there was a bit more focused on the world building than perhaps some of the character interaction. This whole thing with Morgan should have been edited out. And Wynter, this already has enough going on with the subplots, we didn't need a poorly substantiated love triangle on top of it.