Saving my thoughts so far for the final review
1. I absolutely hate that there are all of these fantasy names and then “Jeremy”
2. So far, this is just fourth wing with slightly different names
3. Lots of typos
4. TMI. I don’t need multiple sentences to describe every scent, sight, smell, etc. I want to use my imagination rather than having everything spelled out for me
— Sep 07, 2026 03:19PM
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