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Wow oh wow did that heat up quicklyyy

DTF I hated this book so much it was awful

I’m not sure if it’s me or the writing but it seems very fragmented

I literally just want to know where Onyx is

It could just be me but going back to Cahlish ALL THE TIME??? Saeris accepted the role as ruler of the vampires so if she expects any respect or help she needs to stop whining and do her duty and give them a reason to trust her. Gear only goes so far. Sit down and do the job

I’m curious how these are revised and edited because if noticed 2 major issues in the story line. Once, when Saeris is training with Lotteth and they are both barefooted then all of a sudden he slams his BOOT into her. Then in chapter 14, it mentions Carrion being in Ammontraieth but he is definitely in Zilvaren with Fisher.

I hate when people write about life cycles and wildlife and ecosystems and they have no actual idea what they’re talking about

Thank goodness!! This is what I was hoping for

I could care less about Unseelie. I just want the Underworld story