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TOPIC: Point of view
This narration is 3rd person omniscient because the book knows all the characters feelings and motion. I know this because in this one scene the narrator told everyone's feelings but not out loud.

TOPIC : static vs dynamic
The top two main characters in my book are dynamic because whenever they are having a big scene they don't need to change themselves for the readers to like them. And whenever the scene is over they still act like themselves like nothing ever happened.

TOPIC: Setting
The setting of the book is at the farmers market because whenever they are having a big scene they are always at the farmers market. And it is always happening at night because I guess that's where nobody's active.

TOPIC: 5 Types of conflict
A conflict going on in my book is character vs character because there is an argument about who tricked the squirrel and blaming it on each other, so now they need to find a way on how to prove it wasn't each other.

TOPIC: CLIMAX
The climax of this book is when the otter was at the restaurant he heard noises coming from the walls so he got scared and ran out the door. But the squirrel asked him why he was scared someone was going to attack him, so he responded he heard something in the walls. And the squirrel said there is nothing to be scared about because it was him on the opposite side of the wall the whole time.

TOPIC: MAKE PREDICTION
I already finished the book but one of the predictions I made before I finished the book was if there was going to be a pretty girl with blonde hair and with some red shoes. But something about her is going to stop making her pretty.

TOPIC : VISUALIZE
In the book I'm currently reading I can tell there are sounds, smells and feelings. Why I say that is because it was saying how the girls metal hand was burning and it was too hot but until the sky went to gray mist and her hand started cooling down. Also another thing is when I think about it when it says it went to gray mist, I imagine the smell when it's about to rain.

TOPIC : Supporting characters
Bowser plays loyalty in his role of the book because he is a good influence to birdie and he does right decisions and helps a lot. What I mean by saying he does good decisions is when birdie wanted to do something that was bad, he was convincing birdie why not to do it and how it is bad for him so he didn't do it.

TOPIC : Supporting characters
Bowser plays loyalty in his role of the book because he is a good influence to birdie and he does right decisions and helps a lot. What I mean by saying he does good decisions is when birdie wanted to do something that was bad, he was convincing birdie why not to do it and how it is bad for him so he didn't do it.

TOPIC : MAKING CONNECTIONS
This book reminds me of when me and my dog were always together playing with each other, and this one time where he jumped the couch and face planted on the floor.

TOPIC: VISUALIZE
There was this one scene that felt like it was a cartoon because in this one part it was the Birdie was getting chased by Bowser and they crash into something. Then a Grammy told them to stop but they just run out, it felt like there was sound whenever the book said they pass by.

CHARACTERIZATION : Bowser and Birdie feel like their interested in Grammy because they keep asking questions like "Are you a diver and what type of diver?" And they keep going around Grammy asking other questions that Grammy talks about so that's why I say they are interested.

ANTAGONIST : So the antagonist of this book is nobody so far, I just started reading this book so I'm not at the part where all the good stuff is.

STATIC : I feel like Lily didn't change after the swamp incident because she was scared at all but after she got back home she didn't change any about her. She was wearing new clothes that her neighbors gave her because they found her in a swamp while they were on a boat.

QUESTIONS: Why does the author keep saying the same scene over and over again? Why does Lily keep getting all the bad stuff to happen to her? How come she keeps getting the same nightmare and not even getting to the point where they figure out why she does get it?

CHARACTER V. CHARACTER: The conflict is character vs. character because Lily finds a lot of creepy stuff happening in her room at night. And she goes and tells her parents about it but they don't believe her , and say that she is being dramatic or just getting mad at her. But they said that they will always be by her side even when shes "melodramatic". But they didn't do that they just said "go back to sleep."

Every time I read my book I always get a feeling about what's going to happen next. Like for an example on page 67 it said " I hear bushes moving, what's about to happen." Maybe when it said that it was trying to tell us there was an animal in there.

My protagonist of the story is a little girl named Lily, lily feels like she is being ignored by her parents because every time she needs them they're not there for her. She is currently right now she feels scared because she was cleaning her room when she saw help on her mattress with dust. But when she told her mom that she didn't really check it and told her she was just messing around.

The POV of my book is 3rd person omniscient, I know that because every time when the main character talks or doesn't talk, the narrator always says how they're feeling or what they're about to do. Like for an example on page 19 it says " Dad got mad, It was better to just stay out of his way because he has a soft tone or a stiff tone when he's mad so you need to be careful."

SETTING: A little girl named lily lived in Colorado with her parents, they had to move because of her dad's job. So they left and moved to Florida, and then she figured out she had to live in a very old house. So she knew she couldn't do anything about it because both of her parents are strict.So she was looking at her new room and saw that they left a tv, gaming system, stuff animals, and a bed but it was all dirty.

The genre of my book is horror, I know this because it says creepy stuff like someone flying in the air. It also has a little girl whose parents are abusive and strict. In this one scene it said that the lights are flashing and her computer is twitching. Since her parents don't have enough money for a good house to live in, they live in an abandoned house which is haunted.

My book is about a young girl named Lily, both of her parents are strict. They moved to a new house because their old house was haunted. Lily was so excited to see her new house, but when she arrived at her new house her smile faded away. She found out that her parents got an abandoned house. The house was so dusty and moldy, there was a lot of dirty furniture on the ground that you can barely see.