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point of view- The point of view for my story is 3rd person view omniscient because the narrator is not a person in the book, but knows what the character that is in the book is feeling. The story focuses on Bod, the main character and his experiences, it switches to The Man Jacks prospective sometimes in short sections.

types of conflict- The type of conflict that I think it is is character vs character. I think it is character vs character because the main character (The Man Jack) is trying too find the ghost that is haunting the graveyard that all of his friends including himself go to a lot. Every time The Man Jack goes to the graveyard, there is always a ghost watching whatever he does there so Jack wants too catch him.

supporting character(s)- The supporting character is The Man Jack's friends because they help The Man Jack find things and if The Man Jack needs help with something the friends help him get done whatever he needs help with. The man Jack is trying to find help to get rid of the ghost that is lurking in the graveyard with them.

Making predictions- What I think is going to happen next is Mrs. Lupescu is going too give them cards that have lists on them that the others have too read and they have too memorize the cards/lists that Mrs, Lupescu gave too them. The lists that the others have too memorize are printed on a card in a pale purple ink. Everyone went on the side of the big hill and started reading there cards in their head or loud.

Genre- The topic is genre because there is a lot of genre's. The genre Is horror, thriller mystery, and adventure. It is horror because it is a scary place to be and what is happening. It is thriller because a lot of surprising things happen to the characters. It is mystery because nobody in the book knows who the scary person is . It is adventure because Jack travels too scary graveyards with spirits there.

The Setting- The setting is in " The man Jacks" house, it is a black house. It is really dark inside and it is night out. In the darkness, a dark hand popped out. The setting is also the street, where Jack saw the black hand when the front door was open. The setting was also on the main gait of the graveyard that covered the whole top of the hill that Jack can see from his house which makes him really scared.

Summary- Lebron's dad left him & Lebron was alone with his mom. Lebron played basketball and was surprisingly really good. He went to the NBA and won 4 NBA championship rings. Lebron was the youngest to score 10,000 points, 30,000 points later he passed Kareem Abdul Jabbar and Lebron was the all-time leading scorer in the NBA. He was considered the GOAT by a lot of people and some people thought Jordan was the goat.

summary- Lebron James dad left him and his mom and him were on his own and he started playing basketball but he played football first, he played high school ball and was really good so he moved on to college next thing you know he is in the NBA. He was going crazy. He was the youngest NBA player to score 10,000 points, then 30,000 points later he passed the all time leading scorer. He has 4 rings and still plays.

Inciting incident- I think the inciting Incident is when Akira sees a fire when Her and her dad are driving through the forest and Akira yells out " woah look dad, a fire!" I think this is the inciting incident because that is when the main story starts and that is the first time they see the fire that they get into in the middle and end of the story. When she says that, it launches the Main action in the story.

Archetypes- The Archetype that my story has is Overcoming the monster, a girl and dad are trying to get rid of the fire while driving on a road right next to a forest. On page 11 it says " FIRE! Sue screamed,making them all jump. There is a fire on the other side of the mountain! Akira grabbed her fathers arm,Akira's dad was going the opposite way of our house. We will be alright,but we have to get people to safety."

Visualize- In my book I had a smell while I was reading because the girl Natalie was smelling a fire and in my head, I can just smell the fire because when there is a fire or campfire near me I can just smell the flames and the wood burning in it. Also, the feelings of Akira, When she was almost in the fire, she was scared. In my head I would put myself in the situation and I would be scared too.

Making connections- The text that says ''leave me, No I wont leave you here by yourself, I'm gonna help you get out of this." For me, it is text to self because I am brave and I will not leave anybody behind. Natalie is really brave for being young and still trying to get out of the fire with her dad. When her dad told her to leave and she said "no" I was thinking because that is something I would do the same.

characterization- Akira is the main character and trying to get out of the fire with her dad. She is always feeling calm and always tries to help people, she says things like"I will not leave you here in the fire." This shows that she is a really brave person and she does whatever it takes to get what's done. When she realizes the fire is going towards her she tells everyone to stay calm and to not panic in the car.

Antagonist: The antagonist is nature because the fire is destroying the forest that is close to them. The protagonist and her dad are trying to get away from the fire and not letting it catch up to them. The protagonist is making sure everybody is okay and comforting them. When the protagonist's dad is telling her to leave the protagonist wont let the antagonist hurt them and stop them and say no to leaving them.

question: Why do they have to drive through the fire instead of away? On page 15 it says " Everybody, into the car, we have to drive through it. I think it is weird because they can drive away instead of through it.

Main character- Miles Morales is a static character because he always has the same mood over the book even when he had to fight a villain named Tobin, in the fight he was trying to get away but after the fight he went back to being upset with everything. That is why I think he is a static character.

The conflict in my book is Character vs self because he made himself get in In School Suspension and he is talking bad about other students in there like calling them weird and annoying. He is trying to take his anger out on other people and he does not really care about the rules in school because he thinks school is really boring and he hates it so much. He tries to go on his phone without being caught in school.

I predict that the uncle is alive because he always talks about how much he loved his uncle and how much he wanted to hang out with him. So I think that Miles is gonna be surprised and he's going to find his uncle and his uncle is going to be doing something crazy like he is a villain against spider-man, I think his uncle might not like spider-man because he doesn't know that he is his grandson that he's fighting.

The main focus is that Miles is in school suspension and he is talking about people that have ISS with him and calling them his cellmates. He is saying stuff about His classmates so his language is not good. His thoughts are bad because he thinks about how he hates is Math teacher, he is saying that " What is the point of doing math I will not need this in the future." He is lazy because he doesn't like to do much.

The point of view for my book is 3rd person limited. I know this because the author shows the main character's emotions and feelings. It said that the main character Josh is sad, happy, angry, and none of those, it does not show his moms, dads, or brothers feelings in the book so that is how I know that my book's point of view is 3rd person limited.

My book has no general time, it is not in the future and it is not in the past. They are just normal people with things that people have right now. They are located in Los Angeles California.

My book has no general time, it is not in the future and it is not in the past. They are just normal people with things that people have right now. They are located in Los Angeles California.

The genre for my book is fiction. The fiction genre is sports. I Know The fiction genre is sports because Josh and his brother Jordan play basketball together and they are on the same team. They think whenever they are on the same team they are unbeatable.

There are these 2 brothers that play basketball that are really good. The main character brother( Josh Bell ). Josh is annoyed because his brother( Jordan Bell ) likes this girl and he does not pay attention to Josh. Josh's nickname in basketball is Filthy Mcnasty and Jordan's nickname is JB.