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I like this but it’s so wordy. Like, I know what a biometric security system is, we don’t need a whole paragraph explaining why the boat has thumbprint locked rooms. I know how an autonomous car works, you don’t need to explain it (especially when it isn’t relevant to the story)

This is soo good

my god

Holy shit every chapter is a gut punch

IM SO INVESTED

This kid is scrappy. I like him

I though I was harsh the first time I read this, but no it’s warranted

I’m sorry, but there is no conceivable reality where a ten year old is voluntarily reading pride and prejudice. This is getting ridiculous

Really the cute plot is the only redeeming factor here