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So. Many. Similes. Missing words and partial sentences.

Grammar is really bad with all characters so far which makes it very difficult to read. Also seems to be a decent amount of typos,
“Now, I won’t no shot caller but I’ve done my share of work, too.”

“He could care less what happens to that boy.” Really? The ghost writer messed up with this one. One of the biggest sayings to get wrong lol.