"show not tell." The problem is that I, the reader, have zero interest in being SHOWN a crappy marriage to a crappy man. You could just TELL me in a single sentence that its a crappy marriage with a crappy man and we could move on to the fun part, like leaving him or him dying, or revenge upon his whole family or something. This is why a "good" book is often more frustrating than some "bad" ones to me.
— Aug 06, 2025 08:21AM
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