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I feel like I been invited to listen to the author speak.

Really appreciated his uncle Rob chapter brilliant narrative.

Interesting. Not dry, very witty and personable to the author. The author did a fantastic job slipping into the voice of his uncle carrying on a conversation. The food bits are interesting.

Lt. Lorah looked like a gorilla, and he moved like one too. But not how you'd think. Gorillas, while large, solid, and heavy, actually move with surprising speed when they need to. Don, likewise, sprinted across the street, not even taking the time to close his car door on the way out.

Enough said .

Not a fan of Dons description, made me pause.

I feel kinda cheated getting from the first Malcolm section into Mica. Not that Mica is a bad character. She is very much a good character. I’m kinda at a loss. Like I was hoping to complete this today but I need a break from this character’s pov already. The writing is fantastic I just feel kinda robbed of the Malcolm karma side of things. I guess it’s good that we are getting a little more of Mica.

Definitely out of my head space.

Not really caring about the shift to Mica. It carries a different tone than the previous chapters. I was really enjoying reading Gavin's section.